docs: tighten the "why" page (grammar and figures) - #65
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- Reconcile the size-multiplier claim with the measured comparison data (1.4x-5x -> 1.3x-4.8x brotli) and swap an unverifiable flourish for the measured 2.6 kB runtime figure. - Promote "When WCB is the wrong choice" to a real heading so it is deep-linkable, and give each bullet a clear alternative to reach for. - Remove the Elena references, which appeared with no introduction; the comparison page still carries the full field. - Fix subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing in the intro. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_016wg373f3vRDAYQsW7DbM3g
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Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_016wg373f3vRDAYQsW7DbM3g
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…o Lit and FAST Replace em-dash punctuation with hand-typed punctuation (colons for definitions, periods for clause breaks, commas for appositives, parentheses for asides) across all 13 docs pages; code samples and en-dashes/minus signs left untouched. On the why page, scope the size-multiplier claim to Lit and FAST (2x-4.7x, brotli-compressed) rather than 'every alternative', since Elena is a comparable-ergonomics alternative that costs only ~1.3x. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_016wg373f3vRDAYQsW7DbM3g
The em-dash cleanup turned an em-dash into a colon inside the web-component.md frontmatter description; an unquoted ': ' in YAML is parsed as a nested mapping, which broke the Astro/Netlify build. Quote the value to keep the colon and restore valid frontmatter. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_016wg373f3vRDAYQsW7DbM3g
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Fix grammar and figures