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Revise preprint prose and reorganize introduction
- Remove comparison table; reframe as collaborative positioning
- Fix Berther/Banellis chronology, soften tone on own team's work
- Reorganize intro: physiology → clinical+broader interest →
gastric-brain science (conceptual grouping) → methods+software gap
→ GastroPy
- Tighten abstract: collapse feature list, cut API details and
boilerplate outline sentence
- Prose edit throughout: remove dead rhetoric, hollow emphasis,
template structures, over-hedging (prose-editor agent)
- Solo author for preprint
- Version PDFs: v1 (pre-prose-edit), v2 (current)1 parent 80d614e commit 9f09df8
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