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Revise preprint prose and reorganize introduction
- Remove comparison table; reframe as collaborative positioning - Fix Berther/Banellis chronology, soften tone on own team's work - Reorganize intro: physiology → clinical+broader interest → gastric-brain science (conceptual grouping) → methods+software gap → GastroPy - Tighten abstract: collapse feature list, cut API details and boilerplate outline sentence - Prose edit throughout: remove dead rhetoric, hollow emphasis, template structures, over-hedging (prose-editor agent) - Solo author for preprint - Version PDFs: v1 (pre-prose-edit), v2 (current)
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