diff --git a/faststart/deploy-virtual-server.md b/faststart/deploy-virtual-server.md index 5caf760..b3f8d90 100644 --- a/faststart/deploy-virtual-server.md +++ b/faststart/deploy-virtual-server.md @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Step 1. Request access to LinuxONE Community Cloud. 2. Click **Try Virtual Machines on the LinuxONE Community Cloud**. 3. Complete the required fields on the registration form. **Note:** If you were - given en **Event Code** please enter it, if not leave it blank) + given an **Event Code** please enter it, if not leave it blank) ![alt text](images-deploy/registration-form.png) @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Step 1. Request access to LinuxONE Community Cloud. 5. Check your email for a registration confirmation similar to the following shown. You will need your User ID and Password from this email to sign in to - the self service portal. + the self-service portal. ![alt text](images-deploy/welcome-email.png) @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ First time setup ![alt text](images-deploy/ssp-login.png) 1. Now is also a good time to create or import an SSH key. An SSH public key is - required to deploy Linux instance. The instance can only be accessed with + required to deploy a Linux instance. The instance can only be accessed with your private key that matches the public key. You can generate one now or wait until you deploy your first instance. @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Deploy your LinuxONE virtual server 1. Your Virtual Server type will automatically be "General purpose VM". -2. Provide details information for this instance. +2. Provide detailed information for this instance. - An **Instance Name**, without any spaces or special characters. @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ Log in to your LinuxONE virtual server - UserID: linux1 -- `-i` lets SSH know which identity file to use access the Linux guest. +- `-i` lets SSH know which identity file to use to access the Linux guest. - Serveripaddress: This was written down from the *Manage Instances* page of the LinuxONE Community Cloud.