Review Editor and Local app files API

Author: quinntracy

content/en/docs/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/studio-pro-11/extensibility-api/web/web-extensions-howtos/editor-api.md

@@ -10,11 +10,14 @@ This how-to describes how to open an existing document editor in Studio Pro from
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-This how-to uses the results of [Get Started with the Web Extensibility API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/getting-started/). Complete that how-to before starting this one. You should also be familiar with creating menus as described in [Create a Menu Using Web API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/menu-api/).
+Before starting this how-to, make sure you have completed the following prerequisites:
+
+* This how-to uses the results of [Get Started with the Web Extensibility API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/getting-started/). Complete that how-to before starting this one.
+* Make sure you are familiar with creating menus as described in [Create a Menu Using Web API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/menu-api/).
 
 ## Opening a Document Editor
 
-First, create a menu item. This is done inside the `loaded` method in the main entry point (`src/main/index.ts`). For more information, see [Create a Menu Using Web API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/menu-api/).
+Create a menu item following the steps in [Create a Menu Using Web API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/menu-api/).
 
 This menu action will look for the `Home_Page` document in `MyFirstModule` (however, you can use any module or document in your app). It will then open it with the editor API. For more information, see [Access a Mendix Model Using Web API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/model-api/).
 
@@ -90,6 +93,6 @@ studioPro.ui.extensionsMenu.addEventListener("menuItemActivated", async args =>
 
 ## Extensibility Feedback
 
-If you would like to provide us with additional feedback, you can complete a small [survey](https://survey.alchemer.eu/s3/90801191/Extensibility-Feedback).
+If you would like to provide additional feedback, you can complete a small [survey](https://survey.alchemer.eu/s3/90801191/Extensibility-Feedback).
 
 Any feedback is appreciated.

content/en/docs/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/studio-pro-11/extensibility-api/web/web-extensions-howtos/local-app-files-api.md

@@ -6,18 +6,21 @@ url: /apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/local-app-files-api/
 
 ## Introduction
 
-This how-to shows you how to interact with local application files from within an extension. It adds three new buttons to the tab and three new event handlers for saving, loading, and deleting a file called `HelloWorld.txt`.
+This how-to describes how to interact with local application files from within an extension. In this example, you will:
+
+* Add three new buttons to a tab
+* Add three new event handlers for saving, loading, and deleting a file called `HelloWorld.txt`
 
 ## Prerequisites
 
-This how-to uses the results of [Get Started with the Web Extensibility API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/getting-started/). Please complete that how-to before starting this one.
+This how-to uses the results of [Get Started with the Web Extensibility API](/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/web-extensibility-api-11/getting-started/). Make sure to complete that how-to before starting this one.
 
-## Adding Some Interactivity
+## Adding Interactivity
 
-First, you will add all the code. The changes will then be explained so that you can understand what the code does.
+Implement the code described in the [Code Descriptions](#code-descriptions) section by following the steps below:
 
 1. Open `src/ui/index.tsx`.
-1. Replace the contents of the file with the following code:
+2. Replace the contents of the file with the following code:
 
 ```typescript
 import React, { StrictMode } from "react";
@@ -64,13 +67,13 @@ export const component: IComponent = {
 };
 ```
 
-## What Does the Code Do?
+## Code Descriptions {code-descriptions}
 
 The following sections explain the various parts of the code.
 
 ### saveFile
 
-The `saveFile` callback calls the `putFile` API setting the filename to `HelloWorld.txt` and the content to `Hello world from a file!`.
+The `saveFile` callback calls the `putFile` API. It sets the file name to `HelloWorld.txt` and the content to `Hello world from a file!`.
 
 ```typescript
 const saveFile = async () => {
@@ -84,7 +87,7 @@ const saveFile = async () => {
 
 ### loadFile
 
-The loadFile callback calls the getFile API requesting to load `HelloWorld.txt`. It then shows message box displaying the content of the file.
+The `loadFile` callback calls the `getFile` API. It requests to load `HelloWorld.txt`, then shows a message box that displays the content of the file.
 
 ```typescript
 const loadFile = async () => {
@@ -98,7 +101,7 @@ const loadFile = async () => {
 
 ### deleteFile
 
-The deleteFile callback calls the deleteFile API requesting to delete `HelloWorld.txt`
+The `deleteFile` callback calls the `deleteFile` API. It requests to delete `HelloWorld.txt`.
 
 ```typescript
 const deleteFile = async () => {
@@ -107,7 +110,7 @@ const deleteFile = async () => {
 };
 ```
 
-### Adding the Buttons
+### Adding Buttons
 
 The final part of the code adds three new buttons which, when clicked, call the callbacks described above.
 
@@ -125,19 +128,15 @@ createRoot(document.getElementById("root")!).render(
 );
 ```
 
-## Some Restrictions
-
-The App files API allows you to modify files within your application's folder. It will not:
-
-* serve restricted files such as the `.mpr` file or the contents of some folders such as the `.git` folder.
-* allow access to files outside of the app folder.
+## Restrictions
 
-## Conclusion
+The app files API allows you to modify files within your application's folder. It will not:
 
-You can now create and extension which save, load, and delete files within the app folder.
+* Serve restricted files such as the `.mpr` file, or the contents of some folders, such as the `.git` folder
+* Allow access to files outside of the app folder
 
 ## Extensibility Feedback
 
-If you would like to provide us with some additional feedback you can complete a small [Survey](https://survey.alchemer.eu/s3/90801191/Extensibility-Feedback)
+If you would like to provide additional feedback, you can complete a small [survey](https://survey.alchemer.eu/s3/90801191/Extensibility-Feedback).
 
-Any feedback is much appreciated.
+Any feedback is appreciated.