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microsoft · Jan 13, 2025 · 1021e37 · 1021e37
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     "\n",
     "## Setup\n",
     "\n",
-    "To run this notebook, you will need a recent version of JupyterLab, iPyLeaflet, and CartoPy installed. It is recommended to make a new Conda environment and install both with `conda install -c conda-forge jupyterlab ipyleaflet cartopy`. In addition, you will need the following PyPI packages:"
+    "To run this notebook, you will need a recent version of JupyterLab with iPyLeaflet and CartoPy installed. It is recommended to make a new Conda environment and install all three with `conda install -c conda-forge jupyterlab ipyleaflet cartopy`. In addition, you will need the following PyPI packages:"
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    "source": [
     "## Load an Initial Condition\n",
     "\n",
-    "To run Aurora, you need to initialise the model with the state of the world at a particular point in time. For this demo, we initialise Aurora with HRES T0, which is a state-of-the-art data set that is available in real time. We initialise the model with the state of the world at 11 May 2022 UTC 12."
+    "To run Aurora, you need to initialise the model with the state of the world at a particular point in time. For this demo, we initialise Aurora with HRES T0, which is a state-of-the-art data set that is available in real time. Specifically, we initialise the model with the state of the world at 11 May 2022 UTC 12."
    ]
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    "source": [
     "# Produce Prediction on Azure AI Foundry\n",
     "\n",
-    "Now that we have an initial condition, we connect to the Foundry endpoint and run the model for 4 6-hour steps, producing predictions up to and including 12 May 2022 UTC 12."
+    "Now that we have an initial condition, we connect to the Foundry endpoint and run the model for 4 6-hour steps, producing predictions up to and including UTC 12 the next day."
    ]
   },
   {