From 1021e3717deb27deaded76ac9e633aa6f80e8222 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Wessel Bruinsma Date: Mon, 13 Jan 2025 13:44:17 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Improve the writing a little --- docs/foundry/demo_hres_t0.ipynb | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/foundry/demo_hres_t0.ipynb b/docs/foundry/demo_hres_t0.ipynb index 959e282..341b0f5 100644 --- a/docs/foundry/demo_hres_t0.ipynb +++ b/docs/foundry/demo_hres_t0.ipynb @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ "\n", "## Setup\n", "\n", - "To run this notebook, you will need a recent version of JupyterLab, iPyLeaflet, and CartoPy installed. It is recommended to make a new Conda environment and install both with `conda install -c conda-forge jupyterlab ipyleaflet cartopy`. In addition, you will need the following PyPI packages:" + "To run this notebook, you will need a recent version of JupyterLab with iPyLeaflet and CartoPy installed. It is recommended to make a new Conda environment and install all three with `conda install -c conda-forge jupyterlab ipyleaflet cartopy`. In addition, you will need the following PyPI packages:" ] }, { @@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ "source": [ "## Load an Initial Condition\n", "\n", - "To run Aurora, you need to initialise the model with the state of the world at a particular point in time. For this demo, we initialise Aurora with HRES T0, which is a state-of-the-art data set that is available in real time. We initialise the model with the state of the world at 11 May 2022 UTC 12." + "To run Aurora, you need to initialise the model with the state of the world at a particular point in time. For this demo, we initialise Aurora with HRES T0, which is a state-of-the-art data set that is available in real time. Specifically, we initialise the model with the state of the world at 11 May 2022 UTC 12." ] }, { @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ "source": [ "# Produce Prediction on Azure AI Foundry\n", "\n", - "Now that we have an initial condition, we connect to the Foundry endpoint and run the model for 4 6-hour steps, producing predictions up to and including 12 May 2022 UTC 12." + "Now that we have an initial condition, we connect to the Foundry endpoint and run the model for 4 6-hour steps, producing predictions up to and including UTC 12 the next day." ] }, {