OLS-1642: minor edits

Author: rh-tokeefe

modules/ols-0-3-4-release-notes.adoc

@@ -17,10 +17,8 @@
 
 The following enhancements are made with {ols-official} 0.3.4:
 
-* Beginning with this release, the `NetworkPolicy` resource limits the ingress traffic to the{ols-long} components.
+* Beginning with this release, the `NetworkPolicy` resource can limit the ingress traffic to the {ols-long} components.
 
-* With this release, information about any tools that the {ols-long} service runs while generating a response are shown in the chat after the response.
+* With this release, information about tools used during {ols-long} response generation is included in the chat after the response.
 
-* Beginning with this release, introspection tool calling is enabled for the streaming query endpoint. The {ols-long} service now adds tool call and tool results data to the response. 
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-* Starting with this release, the streaming query endpoint supports introspection tool calls. {ols-long} responses now include both the tool call metadata and the corresponding results.
+* Starting with this release, the streaming query endpoint includes support for introspection tool calls. {ols-long} responses now contain both the tool call metadata and the corresponding results.