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-# 🚀 About Me: Sakshi Oza 
+# About Me: Sakshi Oza 
 
 
-*“Science explores, data explains, open-source develops and creativity connects the dots.”* 
+*“Science explores, data explains, and creativity connects the dots.”* 
 
-Hi, I’m **Sakshi Oza** – a data science and open source passionate about bridging the gap between **healthcare, technology, and innovation**. I’ve spent my last few years exploring the intersection of **data and health**, turning numbers into insights and ideas into impactful solutions.  
+Hi, I’m **Sakshi Oza** – a data science and open source passionate about bridging the gap between **data, technology, and innovation**. I’ve spent my last few years exploring numerous of data and turning numbers into insights and ideas into impactful solutions.  
 
-With a strong foundation from my **M.Tech in Biomedical Engineering** at **IIT Gandhinagar**, I honed my skills in applying technology to solve complex medical challenges. Now, as a **Master of Data Science in Health** student at **University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA)**, I continue to combine analytical thinking with computational tools to advance healthcare diagnostics and outcomes. I believe data tells stories waiting to be heard – stories that can save lives, improve care, and transform healthcare.  
+With a strong foundation from my **M.Tech in Biological Engineering** at **IIT Gandhinagar**, I honed my skills in applying technology to solve complex challenges. Now, as a **Master of Data Science** student at **University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA)**, I continue to combine analytical thinking with computational tools to advance data analysis. I believe data tells stories waiting to be heard – stories that can save lives, improve care, and transform healthcare. 
 
 
 ## A Glimpse of My Work 🌟  
 
-- **📈 Google Summer of Code (2023):**  
+- **Google Summer of Code (2023):**  
    Boosted graph computation efficiency by **30%** through optimized data structures and advanced algorithms, contributing to **Open Science Labs**.  
 
-- **🩺 Healthcare ML Projects:**  
+- **ML Projects:**  
    Achieved **97.5% AUC** in predicting cardiovascular risks using PCA, K-means clustering, and LASSO regression with datasets from **NHANES**.  
 
-- **📚 Research & Innovation:**  
+- **Research:**  
    Co-authored *“Ultrasound Biomarkers: Contrast-Enhanced Ultrasound and Nakagami Imaging to Differentiate Benign and Malignant Choroidal Tumors”*, published in *Current Eye Research*.  
 
-- **🎖 Accolades:**  
+- **Achievements:**  
    Best Poster Finalist at **IEEE South Asian Ultrasonics Symposium** for my work on intraocular tumor differentiation using Nakagami envelope statistics.  
 
 
-## Beyond the Numbers and Code 🎨
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-When I’m not decoding and playing with the datasets, you’ll find me:  
-- 📷 **Capturing Moments**: Photography is my creative escape, where I freeze fleeting moments and tell stories through the lens. 
-- 🎶 **Tuning into Music**: Whether it’s classical melodies or upbeat tunes, music keeps me grounded and energized.  
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 ## Let’s Connect 🌍
 
-I’m always excited to collaborate, share knowledge, and create impactful solutions through data and open source. Let’s connect and build something extraordinary together!  
+I’m always excited to collaborate, share knowledge, and create impactful solutions through data. Let’s connect and build something extraordinary together!  
 
 - **Email**:  [email protected]
 - **GitHub**: [sak-codes](https://github.com/sak-codes)