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ITP-2025-LONDON|LOVETH-OKAFOR|Module-Data-Flows|Book-library #177

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@loveth900 loveth900 commented Apr 2, 2025

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  • There are a few improvements you can make.

  • When I checked the code in index.html at https://validator.w3.org/, it indicated some errors.

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if (title.value === "" || pages.value === "") {
alert("Please fill in all fields!");
return false;
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In terms of input validation,

  1. Are all input properly checked?
  2. What if a user enters only space characters in the "title" input field?
  3. What if a users enters -1 or 3.1416 in the "pages" input field?

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thank you very much for your obsarvation, i have implemented the needed function

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for (let n = rowsNumber - 1; n > 0; n--) {
table.deleteRow(n);
}
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Instead of deleting the table rows one by one, can you think of a more efficient way to remove all rows (except the <th>...</th>) in the table?

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i have fix the error

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titleCell.innerHTML = book.title;
authorCell.innerHTML = book.author;
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With the way the book's title is assigned to an HTML element, a book with a title containing special character sequence such as <i> can possibly ruin the display.

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Can you think of a more consistent way to name the variables representing the two buttons, changeBut and delButton?

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alert(`You've deleted title: ${book.title}`);
myLibrary.splice(i, 1);
render();
saveToLocalStorage(); // Save updated library to localStorage
render(); // Re-render the table
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At the moment when the alert message is displayed, has the book mentioned in the message been deleted yet?
How would you rearrange these statements to make the message truthful?

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@cjyuan i really appreciate your time and effort, and most espacially the details you pay for everthing!! thanks again for the time.

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