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London | Nadarajah_Sripathmanathan | book -library | Module-Data-Flows #178
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I think there are some improvements you can make.
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When I checked the code in index.html
at https://validator.w3.org/, it indicated some errors.
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In terms of input validation,
- Are all input properly checked?
- Can
.value
benull
? (Do we need to checksomeInputElement.value == null
?) - What if a user enters only space characters in the "title" input field?
- What if a users enters
-1
or3.1416
in the "pages" input field?
With the way the book's title is assigned to an HTML element, a book with a title containing special character sequence such as <i>
can possibly ruin the display.
for (let n = rowsNumber - 1; n > 0; n--) { | ||
table.deleteRow(n); | ||
} |
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Instead of deleting the table rows one by one, can you think of a more efficient way to remove all rows (except the <th>...</th>
) in the table?
delButton.id = i + 5; | ||
deleteCell.appendChild(delButton); | ||
delButton.className = "btn btn-warning"; | ||
delButton.innerHTML = "Delete"; | ||
delButton.addEventListener("click", function () { |
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- Are the value assigned to the
id
attribute ofchangeBut
anddelButton
unique? - Is there a need to assign an id attribute to
delButton
? - Is there a need to assign an id attribute to
changeBut
? - Can you think of a more consistent way to name the variables representing the two buttons,
changeBut
anddelButton
?
alert(`You've deleted title: ${myLibrary[i].title}`); | ||
myLibrary.splice(i, 1); |
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At the moment when the alert message is displayed, has the book mentioned in the message been deleted yet?
How would you rearrange these statements to make the message truthful?
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