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London | Nadarajah_Sripathmanathan | book -library | Module-Data-Flows #178

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@sripathman sripathman commented Apr 3, 2025

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hi,
I have done book-library. please could you review my book-library. Thank you

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I think there are some improvements you can make.

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When I checked the code in index.html at https://validator.w3.org/, it indicated some errors.

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In terms of input validation,

  1. Are all input properly checked?
  2. Can .value be null? (Do we need to check someInputElement.value == null?)
  3. What if a user enters only space characters in the "title" input field?
  4. What if a users enters -1 or 3.1416 in the "pages" input field?

With the way the book's title is assigned to an HTML element, a book with a title containing special character sequence such as <i> can possibly ruin the display.

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for (let n = rowsNumber - 1; n > 0; n--) {
table.deleteRow(n);
}
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Instead of deleting the table rows one by one, can you think of a more efficient way to remove all rows (except the <th>...</th>) in the table?

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delButton.id = i + 5;
deleteCell.appendChild(delButton);
delButton.className = "btn btn-warning";
delButton.innerHTML = "Delete";
delButton.addEventListener("click", function () {
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  • Are the value assigned to the id attribute of changeBut and delButton unique?
  • Is there a need to assign an id attribute to delButton?
  • Is there a need to assign an id attribute to changeBut?
  • Can you think of a more consistent way to name the variables representing the two buttons, changeBut and delButton?

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alert(`You've deleted title: ${myLibrary[i].title}`);
myLibrary.splice(i, 1);
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At the moment when the alert message is displayed, has the book mentioned in the message been deleted yet?
How would you rearrange these statements to make the message truthful?

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