Incorporating Tanja's extended feedback

SUSE · Jan 30, 2025 · 93bdca2 · 93bdca2
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diff --git a/articles/sle-agama-installation-x86-64.asm.xml b/articles/sle-agama-installation-x86-64.asm.xml
@@ -98,9 +98,8 @@
         <dm:bugtracker>
           <dm:url>https://bugzilla.suse.com/enter_bug.cgi</dm:url>
           <dm:component>Documentation</dm:component>
-          <dm:product>
-            <!--Bugzilla product string-->
-          </dm:product>
+          <dm:product>SUSE Linux Enterprise Server 16.0</dm:product>
+          <dm:product>SUSE Linux Enterprise Server for SAP Applications 16.0</dm:product>
           <!--
             if the assembly applies to multiple products/productversions, use profiling:
             <dm:product os="sles" condition="16.0 Beta">SUSE Linux Enterprise Server 16.0 Beta</dm:product>
@@ -155,17 +154,12 @@
               <itemizedlist>
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
-                    An &x86-64; system &ndash; either bare metal or a virtual machine with a
-                    minimum of 1&nbsp;CPU, 2&nbsp;GB memory and 20&nbsp;GB storage (which includes
-                    storage for Btrfs snapshots and swap space).
+                    An &x86-64; system &ndash; either bare metal or a virtual machine. For server
+                    installations without any desktop environment, &suse;
+                    recommends a minimum of 1&nbsp;CPU, 2&nbsp;GB memory and 32&nbsp;GB storage (which includes
+                    storage for Btrfs snapshots in the root partition, swap space, and storage for
+                    software packages).
                   </para>
-                  <tip>
-                    <title>Provision for more than minimum requirements</title>
-                    <para>
-                      &suse; recommends allocating resources based on the system's anticipated
-                      usage and workload, which should be higher than the minimum recommendations.
-                    </para>
-                  </tip>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
                   <para>

diff --git a/tasks/sle-agama-manual-installation-x86-64.xml b/tasks/sle-agama-manual-installation-x86-64.xml
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          In the &grub; boot menu, select <guilabel>agama&dash;installer</guilabel>.
+          In the &grub; boot menu, select <guimenu>agama&dash;installer</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
       <step>
         <para>
           Select the product that you want to install, accept the license and click
-          <guilabel>Select</guilabel>.
+          <guimenu>Select</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <note>
           <para>
@@ -131,8 +131,8 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          In the <guilabel>Setup root user authentication</guilabel> window, provide a secure
-          <guilabel>Password for root user</guilabel> and select <guilabel>Accept</guilabel>.
+          In the <guimenu>Setup root user authentication</guimenu> window, provide a secure
+          <guimenu>Password for root user</guimenu> and select <guimenu>Accept</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
         <substeps>
           <step>
             <para>
-              Using the menu on the top left, select <guimenu>Users</guimenu>&gt;<guilabel>Define a new user</guilabel>.
+              Using the menu on the top left, select <guimenu>Users</guimenu>&gt;<guimenu>Define a new user</guimenu>.
             </para>
             <informalfigure>
               <mediaobject>
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
           <step>
             <para>
               Provide the information about the
-              non-root user, and select <guilabel>Accept</guilabel>.
+              non-root user, and select <guimenu>Accept</guimenu>.
             </para>
             <informalfigure>
               <mediaobject>
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          Using the menu on the top left, select <guilabel>Overview</guilabel>&gt;<guilabel>Register it now</guilabel>.
+          Using the menu on the top left, select <guimenu>Overview</guimenu>&gt;<guimenu>Register it now</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -208,8 +208,8 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          In the <guilabel>Registration</guilabel> page, enter the <guilabel>Registration
-          code</guilabel> and select <guilabel>Register</guilabel>.
+          In the <guimenu>Registration</guimenu> page, enter the <guimenu>Registration
+          code</guimenu> and select <guimenu>Register</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -226,10 +226,10 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          After successful registration, the <guilabel>Overview</guilabel> page reappears. Ensure
-          that the configurations for <guilabel>Localization</guilabel>,
-          <guilabel>Storage</guilabel> and <guilabel>Software</guilabel> are correct, and select
-          <guilabel>Install</guilabel>.
+          After successful registration, the <guimenu>Overview</guimenu> page reappears. Ensure
+          that the configurations for <guimenu>Localization</guimenu>,
+          <guimenu>Storage</guimenu> and <guimenu>Software</guimenu> are correct, and select
+          <guimenu>Install</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -246,8 +246,8 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          In the <guilabel>Confirm Installation</guilabel> pop-up, select
-          <guilabel>Continue</guilabel>.
+          In the <guimenu>Confirm Installation</guimenu> pop-up, select
+          <guimenu>Continue</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          Once the installation is complete, select <guilabel>Reboot</guilabel>.
+          Once the installation is complete, select <guimenu>Reboot</guimenu>.
         </para>
         <informalfigure>
           <mediaobject>
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@
       that you can log in and use your system.
     </para>
     <procedure>
-      <title>System verification after installation</title>
+      <title>Verifying the system after installation</title>
       <step>
         <para>
           Log in to the system as root.