Update package_upgrade.rst

admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst

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-====================
-Upgrade via packages
-====================
+=========================
+Upgrade via snap packages
+=========================
 
 Upgrade quickstart
 ------------------
@@ -12,102 +12,49 @@ Combining Nextcloud with snapd makes it a perfect fit for IoT or scalable enviro
 Snapd is a secure and robust technology which the Nextcloud snap team has embraced.
 
 However, the snap is opinionated. 
-- Nextcloud snap uses Apache.
-- Nextcloud snap uses MySQL. 
-- Nextcloud snap uses PHP. 
-In other words, it's not very tinker-friendly.
+
+- Nextcloud snap uses recommended Apache.
+- Nextcloud snap uses recommended MySQL.
+- Nextcloud snap uses recommended PHP.
 
 Installation
 ------------
 
-**Ubuntu**
+**On Ubuntu**
 
- sudo snap install nextcloud
+* https://snapcraft.io/nextcloud
+* Install Nextcloud ``sudo snap install nextcloud``
 
 **All other distros**
-
-(`be warned <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Why-Ubuntu-is-the-only-supported-distro/>`_)
+`be warned <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Why-Ubuntu-is-the-only-supported-distro/>`_
 
 By default the latest stable Nextcloud snap release will be installed and it will automatically update to 
-subsequent stable releases, but there are [other releases available as well](https://github.com/nextcloud/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Release-strategy) 
-and you have full control of [automatic updates](https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Managing-automatic-updates).
+subsequent stable releases, but there are `other releases available as well <https://github.com/nextcloud/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Release-strategy>`_ 
+and you have full control of `automatic updates <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki/Managing-automatic-updates>`_.
 
 After installation, Nextcloud will start automatically.  
 Assuming you and the device on which it was installed are on the same network, you will reach the Nextcloud 
-installation by visiting `<hostname>.local` or the IP address of the instance in your browser. 
-If your hostname is `localhost`  or `localhost.localdomain`, like on an Ubuntu Core device, 
-`nextcloud.local` will be used instead. 
-
-* Go to https://docs.snapcraft.io/installing-snapd/6735
-* Type the command to install snapd
-* Install Nextcloud ($ sudo snap install nextcloud)
+installation by visiting ``<hostname>.local`` or the IP address of the instance in your browser. 
+If your hostname is ``localhost``  or ``localhost.localdomain``, like on an Ubuntu Core device, 
+``nextcloud.local`` will be used instead. 
 
 1st login
 ---------
 
-After a successful install, assuming you and the device on which it was installed are on the 
-same network, you should be able to reach the Nextcloud installation by visiting .local in 
-your browser. If your hostname is localhost or localhost.localdomain, like on an Ubuntu Base 
-device (IoT), nextcloud.local will be used instead.
-
-You will be asked to create a password for "admin" and your favourite cloud will be ready
-
-* Make a :doc:`fresh backup <backup>`.
-* Upgrade your Nextcloud snap: sudo snap refresh nextcloud
-* Run :ref:`occ upgrade <command_line_upgrade_label>`.
-* Take your Nextcloud server out of :ref:`maintenance mode 
-  <maintenance_commands_label>`.  
-* Re-enable third-party apps.
+Upon visiting the Nextcloud installation for the first time, you will be prompted to enter an admin username 
+and password before Nextcloud is initialised. This may take a while depending on resources and the device.
+After you provide that information you will be logged in and able to install apps, create users, and upload files.
 
 Upgrade tips
 ------------
-Upgrading Nextcloud from a Snap is just like upgrading any snap package.
-For example:
-
- sudo snap refresh nextcloud
-
-Your Snap package manager only upgrades the current Nextcloud Snap. Then 
-your Nextcloud server is immediately put into maintenance mode. You may not see 
-this until you refresh your Nextcloud page.
-
-.. figure:: images/upgrade-1.png
-   :scale: 75%
-   :alt: Nextcloud status screen informing users that it is in maintenance mode.
-
-Then use ``nextcloud.occ`` to complete the upgrade. You must run ``nextcloud.occ`` as root. This example is for Debian/Ubuntu::
 
- sudo nextcloud.occ upgrade
+By default the Nextcloud snap will automatically update to subsequent stable releases. You may however upgrade 
+manually too by issuing the command:
 
-This example is for CentOS/RHEL/Fedora::
-
- sudo /snap/bin/nextcloud.occ 
-
-.. _skipped_release_upgrade_label:  
-
-Upgrading across skipped releases
----------------------------------
-
-.. seealso::
-
-   If you upgrade from a previous major version please see :ref:`critical changes<critical-changes>` first.
-
-It is best to update your Nextcloud installation with every new point release, 
-and to never skip any major releases. While this requirement is being worked on, 
-for the moment If you have skipped any major releases you can bring your 
-Nextcloud current with these steps:
-
-If you are using a Snap package:
- sudo snap refresh nextcloud --stable
-
-If you did **not** install via a Snap package:
-
-#. Upgrade your current version to the latest point release
-#. Upgrade your current version to the next major release
-#. Run upgrade routine
-#. Repeat from step 2 until you reach the last available major release
+``sudo snap refresh nextcloud``
+
+If the upgrade fails you can easily revert to the last working version by issuing the command:
 
-You'll find previous Nextcloud releases in the `Nextcloud Server Changelog 
-<https://nextcloud.com/changelog/>`_.
+``sudo snap revert nextcloud``
 
-If upgrading via your Snap package manager fails, then you must perform a 
-:doc:`manual_upgrade`.
+Further documentation, an `extensive Wiki <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki>`_ and `FAQ's <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap/wiki/FAQ's>`_  can be found on the `developers GitHub <https://github.com/nextcloud-snap/nextcloud-snap>`_.