[IMP] Lunch: Update orders #13632
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| When the *Lunch* application is opened, the :guilabel:`Order Your Lunch` dashboard loads. This view | ||
| is also accessed by navigating to :menuselection:`Lunch app --> My Lunch --> New Order`. | ||
| When the **Lunch** application is opened, the :guilabel:`Order Your Lunch` dashboard loads. This | ||
| view is also accessed by navigating to :menuselection:`Lunch app --> My Lunch --> New Order`. |
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| view is also accessed by navigating to :menuselection:`Lunch app --> My Lunch --> New Order`. | |
| view is also accessible by navigating to :menuselection:`Lunch app --> My Lunch --> New Order`. |
Just to break up some of the passive voice verbs (opened, loads)
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| opening the **Lunch** app, or by navigating to :menuselection:`Lunch app --> My Lunch --> New | ||
| Order`. |
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I am confused. You either open the app, or you open the app and do two more things and these are equivalent?
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| .. image:: orders/your-order.png | ||
| :align: center | ||
| :alt: The Your Orders section of the dashboard, with the purchasing information highlighted. |
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I kinda think "Your Orders" or 'Your Orders' because it's syntactically disruptive if you don't call it out as a label.
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Updating to new standards and updating images.
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