Fix Former Student part III reward not triggering

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/B0B50Y11.txt

@@ -35,10 +35,13 @@ AcceptQuest:  [1002]
 
 QuestComplete:  [1004]
 <ce>                       _nobleman_ will be quite
-<ce>                      pleased. %g has even offered
+<ce>                      pleased, and %g has even offered
 <ce>                       to dedicate a fountain in
 <ce>                               your name.
 
+--%g is always lowercase, so changed the sentence
+--structure here to allow it
+
 RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
 _nobleman_ was crazy to accept the deed to ___dungeon_. Crazy or stupid.
 
@@ -58,13 +61,17 @@ You failed %kno when you failed _nobleman_, %pcf. A grave disappointment.
 QuestLogEntry:  [1010]
 %qdt:
  _qgiver_ of
- ==qgiver_ in ___qgiver_
+ __qgiver_ in ___qgiver_
  pled with me to rid ___dungeon_
  of a ghost that is haunting
  it. I have =2dung_ days before
  they they need to begin
  the reconstruction.
 
+--changed ==qigver_ to __qgiver_ as this guarantees
+--showing the building name of the questgiver,
+--which is fine for a temple
+
 Message:  1011
 <ce>                      The ghost has been laid to
 <ce>                        rest. _nobleman_ can now
@@ -113,11 +120,19 @@ _S.01_ task:
 
 _S.02_ task:
 	clicked npc _qgiver_ 
+
+_wincondition_ task:
+	when _S.01_ and _S.02_
 	give pc nothing 
 	change repute with _local_ by +4 
 	change repute with _nobleman_ by +10 
 	end quest 
 
+--added this new wincondition task
+--as previously the quest could be
+--insta-completed by clicking on questgiver alone,
+--quest depended too much on clearclick
+
 _clearclick_ task:
 	when _S.02_ and not _S.01_ 
 	clear _S.02_ _clearclick_ 

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/K0C01Y00.txt

@@ -246,6 +246,14 @@ _S.10_ task:
 	say 1019 
 	start task _victory_
 
+_S.13_ task:
+	toting _gem_ and _qgiver_ clicked 
+	give pc _gold_
+	end quest 
+-- this action was below "pcgetgold" below, and it turns out DFU's order of operations
+-- locked out this action because it was later in the quest file. With this move,
+-- the toting action works properly and quest can be completed with this.
+
 variable _victory_
 _S.11_ task:
 	clicked item _gem_ 
@@ -263,12 +271,6 @@ _clearclick_ task:
 	when _qgclicked_ and not _victory_
 	clear _clearclick_ _qgclicked_
 
-_S.13_ task:
-	toting _gem_ and _qgiver_ clicked 
-	give pc _gold_
-	end quest 
---added victory condition here, per message block 1002
-
 _S.14_ task:
 	when _S.10_ or _S.08_
 -or _S.13_ 

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B00Y06.txt

@@ -17,17 +17,17 @@ QuestorOffer:  [1000]
 <ce>                It seems a wild animal has gotten into
 <ce>                 his place. We need someone to go kill
 <ce>              the thing. The guild will pay _gold_ gold.
-<ce>                         Do you want it %pcn?
+<ce>                         Do you want it, %pcn?
 
 RefuseQuest:  [1001]
 <ce>                      I'm sure someone else will
 <ce>                      be willing to take care of
-<ce>                          this nuisance bear.
+<ce>                          this nuisance animal.
 
 AcceptQuest:  [1002]
 <ce>                    "OK, %pcf. Get over to _house_
 <ce>                 here in town. Get it done in one day.
-<ce>               Nobody wants a animal left roaming around
+<ce>               Nobody wants an animal left roaming around
 <ce>                in their place. Come back here when the
 <ce>                 beast is dead and I'll have your pay
 <ce>                           waiting for you."
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ RumorsPostfailure:  [1006]
 That creature mauled some woman before being chased out of town. What a pity.
 
 RumorsPostsuccess:  [1007]
-The Fighter's Guild killed that bear that got into _house_. It's a good thing we have them around.
+The Fighters Guild killed that animal that got into _house_. It's a good thing we have them around.
 
 QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
 Good job killin' that beast. What can I do for you?
@@ -75,19 +75,19 @@ Message:  1014
 
 Message:  1021
 <ce>                   You hear a voice call out from an
-<ce>                      upper floor, "Its a bear."
+<ce>                      upper floor, "It's a bear."
 
 Message:  1022
 <ce>                   You hear a voice call out from an
-<ce>                      upper floor, "Its a harpy."
+<ce>                      upper floor, "It's a harpy."
 
 Message:  1023
 <ce>                   You hear a voice call out from an
-<ce>                     upper floor, "Its a spider."
+<ce>                     upper floor, "It's a spider."
 
 Message:  1024
 <ce>                   You hear a voice call out from an
-<ce>                      upper floor, "Its a tiger."
+<ce>                      upper floor, "It's a tiger."
 
 Message:  1080
 <ce>                 By the way, since you seemed to have

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B00Y07.txt

@@ -38,21 +38,21 @@ QuestComplete:  [1004]
 <ce>                           your _gold_ gold.
 
 RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
-<ce>                   I hear there's a tiger trapped in
-<ce>                      _house_. He's going to have
+<ce>                   I hear there's an animal trapped in
+<ce>                      _house_. Someone's going to have
 <ce>                        to pay to get it slain.
 
 RumorsPostfailure:  [1006]
-A tiger killed some poor bloke in his own home. A terrible tragedy.
+A beast killed some poor bloke in his own home. A terrible tragedy.
 
 RumorsPostsuccess:  [1007]
-Didn't you kill that rampaging tiger that got into _house_?
+Didn't you kill that rampaging animal that got into _house_?
 
 QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
-Good going with that tiger.
+Good going with that beast.
 
 QuestorPostfailure:  [1009]
-Tigers are tough. Maybe we should start you out with chipmunks. What a putz.
+Beasts are tough. Maybe we should start you out with chipmunks. What a putz.
 
 QuestLogEntry:  [1010]
 %qdt:

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B00Y15.txt

@@ -17,55 +17,58 @@ QuestorOffer:  [1000]
 <ce>                are willing to take it. Actually, some
 <ce>                members prefer these jobs because they
 <ce>                pay just as well as the more difficult
-<ce>                ones. A house here in town has infested
+<ce>                ones. A house here in town is infested
 <ce>                by giant rodents. The wife claims they
 <ce>                 are rats, the husband claims they are
 <ce>                bats. Either way, they want them gone.
 <ce>                          Are you interested?
 
 RefuseQuest:  [1001]
 <ce>                  Obviously you have no love for the
-<ce>                 Fighter's Guild. I will make sure to
+<ce>                 Fighters Guild. I will make sure to
 <ce>                   tell them what you really think.
 
 AcceptQuest:  [1002]
-<ce>                    The bats have infested _house_.
+<ce>                    The animals have infested _house_.
 <ce>                 Go there and kill them all and you'll
 <ce>                 get your pay. I can only give you one
 <ce>                        day to finish this one.
 
 QuestComplete:  [1004]
-<ce>                    Killing bats, even giant ones,
+<ce>                    Killing pests, even giant ones,
 <ce>                    doesn't take much skill, but it
 <ce>                          pays the same, eh?
 
 RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
-<ce>                   Some idiot didn't repair his roof
+<ce>                   Some idiot didn't repair her roof
 <ce>                   for a couple of months. Now she's
-<ce>                     got giant bats in her house.
+<ce>                     got giant rodents in her house.
 
 RumorsPostfailure:  [1006]
 <ce>                   Did you hear about the woman that
 <ce>                    had to abandon her home? It was
-<ce>                    overrun with giant bats and she
+<ce>                    overrun with giant rodents and she
 <ce>                  didn't have enough gold to pay the
 <ce>                     Fighters Guild to kill them.
 
 RumorsPostsuccess:  [1007]
 <ce>                 I heard the Fighters Guild sent some
-<ce>                   %ra over to kill the bats in that
+<ce>                   %ra over to kill the creatures in that
 <ce>                 woman's home. Cost her a bundle, but
-<ce>                 I suppose its better than abandoning
+<ce>                 I suppose it's better than abandoning
 <ce>                               her home.
 
 QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
-<ce>                  So you killed the giant bats. Don't
+<ce>                  So you killed the giant rodents. Don't
 <ce>                  get too full of yourself. They were
-<ce>                           only giant bats.
+<ce>                           only animals.
 
 QuestorPostfailure:  [1009]
 <ce>                 You couldn't even take care of giant
-<ce>                     bats. You are hopeless %pcn.
+<ce>                     rodents. You are hopeless %pcn.
+
+-- messages 1002 to 1009 assumed it was bats, even when it
+-- could be rats. now is ambiguous term instead.
 
 QuestLogEntry:  [1010]
 %qdt:

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B00Y16.txt

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
 
 RumorsPostfailure:  [1006]
 <ce> I'm glad that giant finally moved out of ___mondung_.  I guess it got
-<ce>       bored with it's bland diet of villager night after night.
+<ce>       bored with its bland diet of villager night after night.
 
 RumorsPostsuccess:  [1007]
 <ce>      Thank %god _dummy_ finally sent someone to kill that giant
@@ -59,12 +59,12 @@ QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
 
 QuestorPostfailure:  [1009]
 <ce>                In my day, you could get kicked out of
-<ce>               the Fighter's Guild if you couldn't kill
+<ce>               the Fighters Guild if you couldn't kill
 <ce>                a simple giant.  Times change, I guess.
 
 Message:  1020
 %qdt:
- _questgiver_ of the Fighter's Guild
+ _questgiver_ of the Fighters Guild
  of ___questgiver_ has hired me to
  kill a giant in ___mondung_.
  I am to report back within =qtime_ days
@@ -254,4 +254,8 @@ _giantWaveWhileInDungeon_ task:
 	pc at _mondung_ set _spawnGiants_
 
 _spawnGiants_ task:
-	create foe _giantFriends_ every 3 minutes 6 times with 50% success 
+	create foe _giantFriends_ every 15 minutes 6 times with 50% success 
+
+-- slowed spawn rate. this is a rank 0 quest, and I recognize that this is only after
+-- the giant has been injured, but the previous setup risked
+-- a new player getting surrounded by overwhelming spawns in the middle of combat.

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B00Y17.txt

@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ QuestComplete:  [1004]
 <ce>                    at heart, wouldn't hurt a fly.
 <ce>                  Here's your _gold_ gold, just like
 <ce>                   I promised that nice _questgiver_
-<ce>                        at the Fighter's Guild.
+<ce>                        at the Fighters Guild.
 
 RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
 <ce>     Did you hear that _dummy_'s tiger escaped again?  Killed and
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ RumorsPostfailure:  [1006]
 <ce>    _dummy_'s tiger seems to have disappeared for good. Thank %god!
 
 RumorsPostsuccess:  [1007]
-<ce>     _dummy_ actually hired someone from the Fighter's Guild to go
+<ce>     _dummy_ actually hired someone from the Fighters Guild to go
 <ce>fetch %g3 pet tiger for %g2. What sap would take a silly job like that?
 
 QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B1XY01.txt

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ QuestorOffer:  [1000]
 <ce>                 of flyin' carnivores -- harpies -- who
 <ce>               are making a bunch of travelling merchants
 <ce>                real nervous. Will _reward_ gold get you
-<ce>                       over to ___mondung_ and a
+<ce>                       over to ___mondung_ for a
 <ce>                      little hackin' 'n slashin'?
 
 RefuseQuest:  [1001]
@@ -136,8 +136,12 @@ _qgclicked_ task:
 _1stparton_ task:
 	end quest 
 
-_S.04_ task:
-	create foe _monster_ every 15 minutes 20 times with 50% success 
+variable _S.04_
+_spawnmonster_ task:
+	when _S.04_ and not _mondead_
+	create foe _monster_ every 45 minutes 15 times with 25% success 
+-- this spawn rate was accelerated in 2017, player feedback says it's rather unfair.
+-- players need time to heal for several hours amid enemy spawns.
 
 _clearclick_ task:
 	when _qgclicked_ and not _mondead_

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B20Y02.txt

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ QuestFail:  [1003]
 
 QuestComplete:  [1004]
 <ce>                     %oth, them giants didn't know
-<ce>                     what him 'em, did they, %pcf?
+<ce>                     what hit 'em, did they, %pcf?
 <ce>                Here's your _reward_ gold, as promised.
 
 RumorsDuringQuest:  [1005]
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
 <ce>                   %pcf. You'll go far in the guild.
 
 QuestorPostfailure:  [1009]
-<ce>                   Giants were too much for you huh?
+<ce>                   Giants were too much for you, huh?
 <ce>                    Maybe the guild should have sent
 <ce>                     you out after pygmies instead.
 
@@ -132,8 +132,14 @@ _pcgetsgold_ task:
 	give pc _reward_ 
 	end quest 
 
-_S.01_ task:
-	create foe _monster_ every 15 minutes 15 times with 50% success 
+variable _S.01_
+-- added the new variable below to ensure monsters stop spawning when you've killed six, as the game says.
+
+_spawnmonster_ task:
+	when _S.01_ and not _mondead_
+	create foe _monster_ every 45 minutes 15 times with 25% success 
+-- this spawn rate was accelerated in 2017, player feedback says it's rather unfair.
+-- players need time to heal for several hours amid enemy spawns.
 
 _mondead_ task:
 	killed 6 _monster_ 

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B21Y19.txt

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ Message:  1041
                                      <--->
 <ce>         The Dark Brotherhood has vowed to track down whoever
 <ce>              broke into their headquarters in ___darkb_.
-<ce>                 I'm sure glad it's not me their after.
+<ce>                 I'm sure glad it's not me they're after.
 
 Message:  1050
 <ce>               Yes...?  Wait, you're that Fighters Guild
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ Message:  1051
 <ce>                              It's a trap!
 
 Message:  1052
-<ce>                    Thank you from rescuing me from
+<ce>                    Thank you for rescuing me from
 <ce>                     those assassins.  If you could
 <ce>                        get me to _safehouse_ in
 <ce>                      __safehouse_, I can make my

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B30Y03.txt

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ QuestorPostsuccess:  [1008]
 
 QuestorPostfailure:  [1009]
 <ce>                  Failure is not taken lightly in the
-<ce>                Fighter's Guild. If you couldn't handle
+<ce>                Fighters Guild. If you couldn't handle
 <ce>                 a Daedroth, you shouldn't have taken
 <ce>                 the job. I've got better things to do
 <ce>                  than waste my time talking to you.

Assets/StreamingAssets/Quests/M0B30Y04.txt

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ Message:  1030
  The Fighters Guild
  of ___questgiver_ has hired me to
  slay a lich in =1stparton_ days or less.
- The liches' lair is a place called
+ The lich's lair is a place called
  ___mondung_.
 
 Message:  1080